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how bout here

Posted on Nov 11th, 2007 by davie : laughter davie
i would lean down
and say to her

how bout here

and she would snort
shifting her weight left

ide slide off
cold and tired
rolling my bag out on the ground

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Enlightened.thinker : Light-plerker
about 6 hours later
Enlightened.thinker said

Davy:
Thanks for posting your poetry back on your blog. I like this one, simple yet creates a visual feast.

Metta : metaphorical longshoreman
about 12 hours later
Metta said

wonderful!

jenni : hello
about 17 hours later
jenni said

what was snorting and shifting left? hey David

davie : laughter
about 18 hours later
davie said

horse

jenni : hello
about 22 hours later
jenni said

I see now, that makes sense. I love it.

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